Announcement!
This class I'm taking the 2nd semester (ENGL210: Short Story) has seriously made me think about writing short stories again. Perhaps I will transfer all the time I spend playing Warcraft and concentrate on writing a decent short story. I wonder if people will still call me a loser if I write stories instead of play Warcraft. I mean both are just activities that take up the same amount of time, right?
edit: I have decided what I'm going to write about. Part of the idea came from an article my short story teacher keeps talking about and part of the idea came from Tiffany. We shall see how this goes. In fact...I think I have already come up with the first couple lines of the story.
Our master had been tempting us all day by leaving that rodent in the trap. I suppose that is one thing we have in common with the enemy, the rats can't resist eating the cheese and much as we can't resist consuming them.
edit2: I'm half way done my story. I'll give you the 1st couple of lines from the 2nd page.
I spit it out in disgust and began to examine it more closely. I could have sworn I saw the flesh blink! I licked my paws and wiped the blood of the hard part of what I thought was meat. What I saw sent chills down my spine. No! It can’t be!
edit3 (7/21): It's done! I finished writing the story entitled "The Frame". A few edits/revisions and it will be posted on my blog. For now...here's an excerpt from page 3.
The pain was sharp but the adrenaline made the pain subside rather quickly and I was able to shake them off with ease. Soon, I found it hard to keep my balance. The floor had become slippery with the blood spilt by rats and cats alike.
edit4 (7/25): I sent the story out to my beta testers for review. Another excerpt from page 4.
I had reached the far end of the room when I observed that the closet door had a slight opening. This was the same closet that was always shut tight, the one that the master would kill to keep the contents a secret. Curiously, I poked my head into the closet. I was met with a wall of stench that knocked me back a few steps. What I saw in the closet was even more appalling.
edit: I have decided what I'm going to write about. Part of the idea came from an article my short story teacher keeps talking about and part of the idea came from Tiffany. We shall see how this goes. In fact...I think I have already come up with the first couple lines of the story.
Our master had been tempting us all day by leaving that rodent in the trap. I suppose that is one thing we have in common with the enemy, the rats can't resist eating the cheese and much as we can't resist consuming them.
edit2: I'm half way done my story. I'll give you the 1st couple of lines from the 2nd page.
I spit it out in disgust and began to examine it more closely. I could have sworn I saw the flesh blink! I licked my paws and wiped the blood of the hard part of what I thought was meat. What I saw sent chills down my spine. No! It can’t be!
edit3 (7/21): It's done! I finished writing the story entitled "The Frame". A few edits/revisions and it will be posted on my blog. For now...here's an excerpt from page 3.
The pain was sharp but the adrenaline made the pain subside rather quickly and I was able to shake them off with ease. Soon, I found it hard to keep my balance. The floor had become slippery with the blood spilt by rats and cats alike.
edit4 (7/25): I sent the story out to my beta testers for review. Another excerpt from page 4.
I had reached the far end of the room when I observed that the closet door had a slight opening. This was the same closet that was always shut tight, the one that the master would kill to keep the contents a secret. Curiously, I poked my head into the closet. I was met with a wall of stench that knocked me back a few steps. What I saw in the closet was even more appalling.